Moves We Make

Moves we make could it be our lives are at state could it be a piece of cake could we take 
the wrong stepsthat led us down a drk road where we never can come back.
Could we ever be strong enough to overcome the addiction of failer
The moves we make could send us to rich and fame or poor and lame its your game
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 8, 2009 at 3:04 PM
Impressive point! Jeremia
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