Moved On

Removing patches
I have regained strength to touch
     and reveal scarred heart;
Once wounded in the battle
     where I fought for love,
Now healed, my armor stronger;
     Shall my heart cries war
I must face the opponent,
and taste its sweet surrender
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 21, 2008 at 4:15 AM
A truly empowering write my friend, thank you doe sharing the read and Congratulations Teresita on a well deserved win. God Bless, Always, Adell
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September 19, 2008 at 10:54 PM
congratulations fellow filipino on your win in Brian Strand's contest. very well deserved! warm regards, GiNo,18,Philippines
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September 18, 2008 at 5:14 PM
Congratulations Teresita on your win in Brian's contest! Well done! Love, Shar
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September 18, 2008 at 1:07 PM
Interesting reflection. I like the opening line. Congratulations on being selected as one of the winners in Brian's Naga-Uta contest. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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September 18, 2008 at 8:18 AM
It's best to move on....sometimes the scars make us stronger! ~ Nice and powerful write! ~ Carrie
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September 18, 2008 at 7:18 AM
Teresita - Very well written poem with a powerful message - God Bless
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