Jun-Jun Villanueva Poet Haiku

' Mouth-Watering Milieu '

rosy nestle flows
succulent pinkish top scoop
mouth's now watering...

pure savory hmm...
melts like puffs of clouds floating
swinging goddess...

woods' delicacy
chocolate brown heaven - ohhh!
"NEAPOLITAN".

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Margaret Okubo November 30, 2011 at 10:48 AM Great haiku. Mouth watering indeed. You have me licking my lips.

Margaret Okubo October 27, 2011 at 1:59 PM Hmm! Mouth watering. Great write Jun-Jun. Thanks for yor kind comment.

Carol Sunshine Brown October 7, 2011 at 8:18 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Neapolitan Ice Cream (Haiku)" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 7, 2011 at 12:57 AM Congrats jun-jun on a top ten with with this yummy sweet treat luv...

Lee Ramage October 6, 2011 at 10:58 PM Yes.... I'm salivating. Congratulations Lee

Cory Long October 6, 2011 at 3:33 PM congrats on your stunning win.. free spirit

Carolyn Devonshire October 6, 2011 at 1:56 PM I like the way you incorporated nature into each verse, Jun-Jun. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A October 6, 2011 at 12:00 PM DEAR JUN-JUN~.. CONGRATULATIONS,, FOR YOUR WONDERFUL AND SWEET ENTRY... GOD BLESS YOU,..ALWAYS,..P.D.

Carol Sunshine Brown September 30, 2011 at 1:37 PM I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Jun-Jun. I wish you a most enjoyable weekend with lots of sunshine and happy thoughts. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A September 30, 2011 at 9:03 AM Jun_ jun,.. ohhh! brown heaven,,, sneaking on,, how are you?,, have a nice one,..p.d..