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Mouse and a Bale of Hay

You'll never guess what what I saw today, A little mouse eating a bale of hay, I said, "Mouse, what the heck you trying to do?" Mouse said, "What business is it to you?" I said, "Mouse there is no way you can eat it all." Because that bale is so big and you are so small. Mouse said, "You think you are so smart, I'm going to eat this hay but this is just a start." "I didn't say I'd eat it all in one day," "For this one big bale of hay." "But I know what I can do." "I'll finish this hay in day two." The next day Mouse could barely talk, Lying on his back for he couldn't walk, His belly was swollen as big as a house, All that hay was in that little mouse. I said, "Mouse, how did you eat all that hay?" He just had this to say, "It was hard and took all night." The secret he said was taking small bites!

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Date: 9/24/2018 10:20:00 PM
A sweet poem, Timothy. We feel for that determined mouse!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/24/2018 10:47:00 PM
Determination, never tell a small one what they cant do! Thank you Friend!
Date: 9/18/2018 10:59:00 PM
G'day Timothy … thanks for the grin, but of course there is logic in your poem, for example - one drop of water helps make a river - thanks Mate - Lindsay
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/19/2018 12:13:00 AM
thanks Lindsay :)

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