Mouse

mouse
runs fast
likes inside
wall at his back
squeaks loudly when caught
goodbye darling
a startling
racing
mouse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Hankins Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 12:57 PM
I love "goodbye darling," but I like the splat even better! Mice drive me crazy. I don't like them in my home.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 7:05 PM
I do not like how fast they run - their swiftness scares me.
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