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Huddled beneath the cherry trees, two doves suppress exhalation yawn, both in love. Darken encumbered clouds nudge falling rain; they coo and listen together remain. 3/16/2023

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Date: 3/19/2023 12:17:00 PM
Beautiful, Eve! They support one another and enjoy each other in all weather!
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Date: 3/17/2023 5:23:00 AM
Your poetry is fantastic. Your gorgeous imagery paired with well-chosen words put extra depth to your poem.
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Date: 3/17/2023 2:24:00 AM
Lovely couplets. Hugs.
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Date: 3/17/2023 1:34:00 AM
Lovely picture of love, Eve:)
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