Mourning

Winter rains caress the slope Where your ashes fell Rain and Spring will bring new life

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Richard Hayes

Date: 6/30/2012 1:07:00 AM

Thank you all for the encouraging words. I think I will enjoy myself here.

Steven Henderson

Date: 6/29/2012 1:22:00 PM

A nice sounding spice. Welcome to soup. Peace and blessings.@

Richard Hayes
Date: 6/30/2012 1:10:00 AM

Thank you for the welcom and peace and blessings to you.

Ann Roske

Date: 6/29/2012 7:34:00 AM

This is beautiful Richard - welcome to PS.

Richard Hayes
Date: 6/30/2012 1:11:00 AM

Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/29/2012 7:04:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup Richard. - You do this haiku very well, like it a lot. Have a lovely weekend with poetry and family. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Richard Hayes
Date: 6/30/2012 1:12:00 AM

Thank you. And I hope your weekend is filled with family and love and peace.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2012 6:27:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Richard. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Richard Hayes
Date: 6/30/2012 1:14:00 AM

This site is a find and my only regret is not finding it sooner. Poems need to shared, to be read. Thank you for the kind words and encouragement. With the community I have found here, I cannot fail to learn and become a better poet. Peace and happiness to you.