Mournful Taste

twisted words echo silently across a gostly
wind sweeped dawn...intertwined limps fall
with no grace comsemed with the underleing
thoughts.....the grin then make u see the
world as its true self as let u down time and
again...the mistakes hold ur dreams to ransom
the mournful taste of whisky numbs ur
pain.....unforcable vengence creeps around
ur vains intertwined and mischivers..the
unknown is the greatest adventure dont
formalise ur freedom let it flow there too
many chains that shackle ur sences
philosophize romanacise dont gamble with
love it will only break ur heart...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 11:56 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 6:50 PM
JOHNNY, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
Mehta Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 7:05 PM
I enjoyed the poem
Brown Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 3:09 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Johnny. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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