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Mournful Taste

twisted words echo silently across a gostly wind sweeped dawn...intertwined limps fall with no grace comsemed with the underleing thoughts.....the grin then make u see the world as its true self as let u down time and again...the mistakes hold ur dreams to ransom the mournful taste of whisky numbs ur pain.....unforcable vengence creeps around ur vains intertwined and mischivers..the unknown is the greatest adventure dont formalise ur freedom let it flow there too many chains that shackle ur sences philosophize romanacise dont gamble with love it will only break ur heart...

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Date: 1/31/2016 6:50:00 PM
JOHNNY, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 5/4/2010 7:05:00 PM
I enjoyed the poem
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Date: 5/4/2010 3:09:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Johnny. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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