Mournful, Residual Toll

Lamp shade shrouds my blanched soul
Dimming, residual light o'er weary heart doth roll
Flickering memories cloud my intellectual pole
Obscure shadows flutter through subconscious pinhole
Dusk, fading hope through my restive spirit doth stroll
Encroaching darkness shutters my resolve; my psyche doth patrol
Murky thoughts leaf through my sensory scroll
Shimmering reflections flounder, then my inner being roil
Foreboding sentiments my sanity will parole
Oscillating dreams eclipse all feelings of control
Loosely anchored in sinking ship; fueled by despondency's blackest coal
Mournful echoes sound in waves, marooning courage on lifeless 
shoal
Last glimmer of twilight, now must pay the woeful toll
Shattered and shipwrecked brokered to misery's dole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 12/5/2010 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of ERyland, Stephen
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Date: 11/30/2010 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 11/29/2010 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations Stephen on your win in Ryland Matthew's "My Darkest Hour" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/27/2010 11:19:00 PM
Stephen congratulations on your placement in the contest ;) Wilma
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Date: 11/27/2010 7:24:00 PM
Such beutiful and awesome images Stephen. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 11/27/2010 12:12:00 PM
Stephen, Congratulations on your worthy poem's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/27/2010 8:37:00 AM
You really describe the sense of despair very well in this poem, Stephen. Many readers will be able relate to all of the feelings you described. Congratulations on your placement in Ryland's contest. Peace and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 11/27/2010 7:05:00 AM
Congrats Stephen on your HM in Rylands' contest with this rare beauty entry ..wonderful words so profound ..enjoy your special honor today with luv and a happy weekend too..
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Date: 11/27/2010 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on this honorable mention in the contest, Stephen
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Date: 11/16/2010 9:32:00 AM
It is very cold here in Springfield,Ohio today. But I must say your poetry has pulled my heartstrings. Thank you for sharing it Stephen. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2010 10:31:00 PM
rhyming is awesome lol, they all end in the oll, very cool, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 11/15/2010 9:49:00 AM
I really like the imagery and flow of this poem! It brings to mind my favorite poet of old for some reason, Edgar Allen Poe. Thanks for sharing!
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