Mountains

mountains so high
looks mysterious in the night
lies a deepest secret




November 10, 2012
2nd Place Winner
For Charles Contest
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Dom Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 4:23 PM
Hi, Maria, I am liking your haiku.
Brown Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 6:13 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Charles' "Haiku" contest Maria. I am sorry this is a very late comment. Love, Carol
Arowolo Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 9:21 AM
Nice one,Maria..Congrats on your superb win...
Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 8:37 AM
Congratulations on your win, sweet maria!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 5:46 AM
Big congratulations on your win Maria, hugs xx
Gasun Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 11:23 PM
Many congratulations on your win also my dear friend Mary! Hurray! Thanks for stopping by and your inspiring messages and congratulations, too. love/hungs, Leonora
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November 23, 2012 at 6:15 PM
Maria, congratulations with your haiku win,,, take care..pd
Gasun Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 11:01 PM
I like to climb this mountain to find the secret within it my friend. Very good Haiku. I love it! love, LG
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 11:13 AM
hmmm, makes me want to know that secret.
Poet Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 7:38 AM
Very nice haiku Maria.Love it!
Horne Avatar
November 10, 2012 at 2:21 PM
lovely haiku, my friend. Congrats on all your wins : )
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November 10, 2012 at 10:04 AM
Ahhhh Now Im waiting for a part 2... very intriguing ...hugs Michael
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