Mountain's

Night's so darkened to you hate
standing alone

a Mountain's cliff,such a drop to my thoughts,

i still see your beautiful eye's throw my
tears of pain

for standing here on my own without your hands
to hold .

seems so painful.  

                      the nightwalker    24Th October 2010
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Devonshire Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 7:54 AM
A very sad poem that conveys your sadness beautifully, Duncan. Excellent short verse! Love, Carolyn
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October 29, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Sad for the one that you love to go away..Very creative way of conveying the idea..Sara
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October 25, 2010 at 10:10 AM
deep and awesome write, enjoyed your write,..P.D.
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