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Night's so darkened to you hate standing alone a Mountain's cliff,such a drop to my thoughts, i still see your beautiful eye's throw my tears of pain for standing here on my own without your hands to hold . seems so painful. the nightwalker 24Th October 2010 http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_forms/

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Date: 10/29/2010 7:54:00 AM
A very sad poem that conveys your sadness beautifully, Duncan. Excellent short verse! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/29/2010 5:26:00 AM
Sad for the one that you love to go away..Very creative way of conveying the idea..Sara
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Date: 10/25/2010 10:10:00 AM
deep and awesome write, enjoyed your write,..P.D.
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