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Mountain's

Night's so darkened to you hate
standing alone

a Mountain's cliff,such a drop to my thoughts,

i still see your beautiful eye's throw my
tears of pain

for standing here on my own without your hands
to hold .

seems so painful.  

                      the nightwalker    24Th October 2010
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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/29/2010 7:54:00 AM

A very sad poem that conveys your sadness beautifully, Duncan. Excellent short verse! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/29/2010 5:26:00 AM

Sad for the one that you love to go away..Very creative way of conveying the idea..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/25/2010 10:10:00 AM

deep and awesome write, enjoyed your write,..P.D.