Mountain-River

Sunshine helps melt snow,
On the tall, busy mountain
That's guiding her son.

Sensing victory,
After a long, hard journey
River joins the sea.

The river's mother-
Mountain is proud and glad that
Her son reached his goal.

By Sadaf Syed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 9:56 PM
I love how you personified things in your haiku set. I did that too. I had thought of doing mountain and river but this way you did it , never even occurred to me. CLEVER you.
Amadore Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 7:57 AM
Three nicely related haiku...encapsulating the essences of river and mountain.
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