Mountain Snow

Snow cap A mountain top Filled to the brim With an icy cold treat A white delight, frigid fun Excitement
Russell Sivey Form Vignette
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 3:20 PM
hey cool, centered, it resembles a small capped mountain too!!
Falotico Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 2:35 PM
You just made snow so much fun.. wonderful image here my friend... Michael
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 12:47 PM
I can see the scene..If for a contest, reads like a winner ...Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for stopping by ..I hope that you are still laughing..Sara
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 12:26 PM
It sounds a bit like me, a white delight but frigid fun lol . love it Russell
Onclaud Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 11:32 AM
nice to see yet another poetic wonder from you, russell... exciting is the word; enjoyed the visual appeal of this vignette.. am glad you are writing in this form.. magnificent scene!..:) huggs
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