Mountain Rain

Words fell like rain over the mountain
As nature prepared for her day of work
The first drops fell on the mountain's eyes
Like glistening diamonds of treasured surprise
The rain fell over the mountain's side
And embraced with trickling arms to guide
The rain fell into the mountain canyon
And formed a river of deep abandon
Swirling with airy, white foam peaks
Driven by currents of deep-swept mystique
That flowed to the meadow and flowered its plain
As if my mind were the mountain
And your words were the rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/7/2009 1:57:00 PM
Really beautiful images, Jane! You certainly have a feel for nature - I bet you'd make great Haiku. Why not try Raul's haiku contest? Thanks for your comments on settled - we're both pensioners now, so I guess the question's settled for good (or ill)!
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Date: 7/7/2009 11:46:00 AM
Wow! Good us of imagery in this thought provoking poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Thank you for your kind comments. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/7/2009 11:11:00 AM
Beautiful oh so beautiful. Outstanding writing my friend. I will read more of your poetry later dear. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2009 10:38:00 PM
i like this
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