Mountain of Faith

Far off bathed in hazy blue light,
Reaching and hugging clouds real tight.
A soft and peaceful landscape scene
How romantic it all would seem.

Sunlight casting patches on your back,
The eye follows a meandering track.
Snowy dust glitter down one side,
As cloud shadows drift and glide.

But when I draw so very near
I see the rock face, repelling sheer.
Jagged teeth grinning down
Ridges form an angry frown.

Avalanche path an ugly scar
A drunken path from afar.
Fluffy clouds now roiling black
The deafening sound of lightnings crack.

Trees bow, groan and creak.
Golden grasses, now very bleak.
I feel the anguish sear my heart.
Natures forces tear dreams apart.

The wind howling for evermore
Be careful what you pray for.
As the mountain and I become as one,
I despairingly cry:"Thy will be done"!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Spence Sr Avatar
September 28, 2008 at 12:35 PM
This is very descriptive. The ending line is ironical in the scheme of the poem. I like the shift and how the piece ends. That's really unexpected and makes the piece more impacting. Great job! ~Joseph
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September 19, 2008 at 3:49 PM
Love your poetry. I think I've read them all and hope you will be posting more soon. Wonderful message in this one. Thank you for your ongoing encouragement. Blessings to you. Karen
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July 26, 2008 at 2:45 PM
enjoyed this fine piece of poetry and thank you for reading my poems and for your kind comments
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