Mountain Goat Hiku



Granite g r i p s each hoof,
                               o
                          r        u
thin air coils.   a       n
                              d 
calm eyes ~
sky devours the s
                               u
                                  n.
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Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 11:03 AM
How cool is this!! Congrats, Billie Jamabek
Jama Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 12:01 PM
Thanks Andrea much appreciated
Rodgers Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 9:10 AM
Dear Billie, I think you captured the mountain goat’s essence with such elegant brevity and the granite grip, the calm eyes, and the sky devouring the sun. It’s like watching a master climber poised in stillness, perfectly balanced between earth and sky. Such a powerful glimpse into nature’s quiet strength. - Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Jama Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 9:46 AM
Thank you kindly, Daniel
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