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Mountain Goat Hiku

Granite g r i p s each hoof, o r u thin air coils. a n d calm eyes ~ sky devours the s u n.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2025 11:03:00 AM

How cool is this!! Congrats, Billie Jamabek

Billie Jama
Date: 5/19/2025 12:01:00 PM

Thanks Andrea much appreciated

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/19/2025 9:10:00 AM

Dear Billie, I think you captured the mountain goat’s essence with such elegant brevity and the granite grip, the calm eyes, and the sky devouring the sun. It’s like watching a master climber poised in stillness, perfectly balanced between earth and sky. Such a powerful glimpse into nature’s quiet strength. - Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Billie Jama
Date: 5/19/2025 9:46:00 AM

Thank you kindly, Daniel