David William Breidenthal Poet Haiku

Mountain Climbing

I’m climbing  
Above the canyon…the sun
Hits  		the 		rocks

I ascend
As 	I 	take 	risk 	after 	risk
UP I GO!

I’m climbing
I 	rely 	on 	my 	own 	strength
I’m doing FINE!

I descend
While	 I 	urgently 	hold 	on
For dear life…

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Funom Makama March 23, 2013 at 9:04 AM beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem! David William Breidenthal March 23, 2013 at 7:50 PM Sincerely, D.W.B. ** David William Breidenthal March 23, 2013 at 7:48 PM Terrific! Wow! Snowy and windy? Sounds like a perfect weather to me!! Thanks a bill! xD I'm glad it's a relaxing poem! Have a wonderful weekend. - D.W.B.