Mountain Brook

mountain brook Envy of newts, tadpoles and young boys © 2010 Charles Henderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 12, 2010 at 6:06 AM
You have me smiling with this scene. Nothing like a good swim to beat the summer heat. Sounds like a fun time. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen
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March 12, 2010 at 6:04 AM
Delightful haiku that recalls the joys of youth in the school-free summer months. Lovely haiku, Charles! Best wishes, Carolyn
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March 12, 2010 at 4:55 AM
Great write I can see the scene..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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March 12, 2010 at 1:02 AM
Excellent!
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