Mound of Sand

tiny mound of sand harbor crab- dog diggs

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Date: 6/8/2019 10:39:00 AM

Hi MLK - I can see the dog frantically trying to reach the crab - great imagery! Hugs, Jennifer.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/11/2019 8:30:00 AM

Good, that's the image I was trying for. Thanks.

Date: 6/5/2019 8:59:00 PM

A seashore moment depicted so beautifully and evocatively, M. L. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/5/2019 10:10:00 PM

Thank you.

Date: 6/5/2019 7:40:00 AM

Your words evoke that image..well written, MLK.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/5/2019 10:10:00 PM

Thanks so much.

Date: 6/5/2019 6:45:00 AM

Nice!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/5/2019 10:10:00 PM

Appreciate the comments.

Date: 6/5/2019 5:59:00 AM

I can see it and I laugh, thinking of the sand in my face as it throws it recklessly toward my eyes.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/5/2019 10:10:00 PM

That's not neighborly. Tell it so.! That rude crab.

Date: 6/5/2019 3:41:00 AM

Can just see the image M.L. , dog flicking sand for all he's worth. Tom

M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/5/2019 10:11:00 PM

Good, thanks.