Mound of Sand

tiny mound of sand harbor crab- dog diggs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Proxenos Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 10:39 AM
Hi MLK - I can see the dog frantically trying to reach the crab - great imagery! Hugs, Jennifer.
Kiser Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Good, that's the image I was trying for. Thanks.
Ashley Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 8:59 PM
A seashore moment depicted so beautifully and evocatively, M. L. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Kiser Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 10:10 PM
Thank you.
Pandit Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 7:40 AM
Your words evoke that image..well written, MLK.
Kiser Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 10:10 PM
Thanks so much.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 6:45 AM
Nice!
Kiser Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 10:10 PM
Appreciate the comments.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 5:59 AM
I can see it and I laugh, thinking of the sand in my face as it throws it recklessly toward my eyes.
Kiser Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 10:10 PM
That's not neighborly. Tell it so.! That rude crab.
Cunningham Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 3:41 AM
Can just see the image M.L. , dog flicking sand for all he's worth. Tom
Kiser Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 10:11 PM
Good, thanks.
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