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Her motivations for a happy life, of jump and dance and sing. Her desire to live holding a rainbow, loving everything, Began when her emotional shackles fell off onto the floor. She stood, looking through others eyes, at their personal war. It was clear that everyone had a choice, regarding their pep and shine. To be the person with the sparkling eyes, or to drink the sparkling wine. She made the choice, at her fork in the road, to be a silhouette of pure glee. Nothing could chain her to sad depressed, instead she’d chained herself to free.

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Date: 5/30/2016 1:05:00 PM
ahhh, VERY nice and positive poem about someone who chose the wisest path!
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Date: 5/30/2016 11:55:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, it's such a simple choice, yet so difficult.
Date: 5/30/2016 3:18:00 AM
Such an uplifting write - I particularly love the final stanza ... motivated to choose happy is an excellent title:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/30/2016 11:54:00 PM
Thanks Jan, we can all make choices.

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