Moths and Butterflies

Moths and butterflies Cycle of births and rebirths Moths and butterflies Moths and butterflies/haiku Copyright (C) rajat kanti chakrabarty 23 November 2014

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/24/2014 6:19:00 PM

It would be amazing to live once as a caterpillar, then be transformed to live once again, as a butterfly... I liked this interesting haiku, Rajat. Nice work!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/25/2014 10:03:00 AM

moths are nocturnal and butterflies are diurnal insects. so this allusion day-night cycle/ birth-death-rebirth cycle/ your interpretation is so good and inspiring. Love Kelly. I have your poems. They are so gratifying.Hugs! rajat

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2014 6:11:00 PM

I love the cycle they go through. It is most interesting.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/25/2014 10:06:00 AM

I do love it too. We always go through transformations.Love. Hugs! rajat

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/23/2014 8:05:00 PM

Rajat, I have not seen a line repeated in haiku before, which makes this one unique and memorable. I like the mix of night and day as in the taijitu symbol of contrast I feel portrayed by your moths and butterflies. The harmony of night and day....

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/25/2014 10:08:00 AM

Yes a contrast. Repetition completes the cycle. Love Connie. God bless you....rajat

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/23/2014 5:54:00 PM

Love butterflies, my friend sweet work excellently put together also thank you for your comments on my poem also, cheri

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/25/2014 10:11:00 AM

cherl, thank you for your beautiful comments.love ....rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/23/2014 9:50:00 AM

Excellent haiku about such an interesting subject as this moths and butterflies. A 7 for me! Have a great week my dear friend Rajat. God bless you! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/25/2014 10:11:00 AM

thank you D. Love xx rajat

Jan Allison

Date: 11/23/2014 8:22:00 AM

lovely haiku Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/25/2014 10:12:00 AM

Thank you Jan for visiting XXX Love XXX rajat