Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Triolet

Mother's Sculpture

You went to new abode in May,
left unfinished sculpture in me.
You couldn’t see how I shaped today
you went to new abode tn May
I look up to the milky way,
in a shining blue star I see
you went to new abode in May
left unfinished sculpture in me.

May 4, 2019
Contest : Celebrate May with a Triolet (tree-o-lay)
Sponsor : Andrea Dietrich
Theme chosen : Mother's Day

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Line Gauthier May 17, 2019 at 2:20 PM Very touching, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2019 at 6:03 PM This is so poignant, Subimal. I can't believe I am first to comment on it. Thanks for entering my contest and congrats on your win.