Mothers Love

I love my kids so much it hurts, 
I want the best and all to work, 
I want a man to be there best friend, 
To share there tears to the very end, 
To hold there hands when they feel down, 
To bring them up from a frown, 
To make them laugh and be content, 
Show them how to commit, 
To be good people through through, 
I think that man is going to be you .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 2, 2010 at 11:42 AM
Thanks carol its all new to me but getting there
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February 2, 2010 at 5:08 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Teresa. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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February 2, 2010 at 3:56 AM
It's got some rhyme and rhythm. Could be a rhyme. You have expressed what mothers everywhere want for their children. They want love and acceptance. Keep the creative pen flowing. Welcome to soup if I have not said so previously. Sara
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February 1, 2010 at 11:20 AM
Very touching.
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February 1, 2010 at 11:10 AM
Teresa, heart felt and wonderful. I hope you find that. Nice write. David
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