Bl Devnath Poet I do not know?

Mother's Eyes

Mother punishes her child 
                             Child stops crying when pain is gone
                                  After that tear begins to flow on
                                     Silently from mother's eyes

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 16, 2011 at 8:59 AM I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix BL. Thank you so much for sharing. Love, Carol Bl Devnath August 16, 2011 at 4:51 PM Many many thanks for your sweet inspiring comment. Good night. bl

Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 16, 2011 at 7:50 AM touching write bl... being a mother i know how true this is...it sometimes feels like we punish ourselves when we punish our children....great expression....thanks for sharing.....smiles...chiquita Bl Devnath August 21, 2011 at 10:50 AM Thanks for your nice comment on my write. Sorry for late to give thanks.

Nancy Jones August 15, 2011 at 9:51 PM Yes, poignant. Perhaps play with forms to hone your obvious skills. Bl Devnath August 21, 2011 at 10:51 AM Thanks, for your comment. I am late to thank you, sorry.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 15, 2011 at 3:41 PM Poignant and touchy expressions, devnath Bl Devnath August 21, 2011 at 10:53 AM Sorry for giving thanks lately. I was busy. Excuse me. bl

Carolyn Devonshire August 15, 2011 at 2:27 PM BL, although I have no children, I'm sure parents feel worse than their children do after punishment is imposed. Very powerful message here and a sad, poignant image. Love, Carolyn Bl Devnath August 21, 2011 at 10:54 AM Sorry for giving you thanks, lately. bl