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Mother's Eyes

I'm the two year old
with white hair and wrinkly skin-
mother's eyes' magic




Honorable Mention in STRAND SELECT 7 ,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

Copyright © Jenish Somadas | Year Posted 2020

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February 3, 2020 at 4:14 AM

An excellent write. God bless you.

February 3, 2020 at 4:18 AM

Thank you Pratap..

Caren Krutsinger

January 30, 2020 at 5:49 AM

In twelve words you have delighted me!

January 30, 2020 at 5:51 AM

Thank you Caren.. With that single line, you delighted me also..

Kai Michael Neumann

January 27, 2020 at 5:13 AM

True story. So simple, so wise ...

January 27, 2020 at 5:36 AM

Thank you Kai for your kind words..

January 23, 2020 at 11:36 AM

Simply Wonderful, Jenish.. So heartfelt!! This is a definite fave for me.. Have a blessed day!

January 24, 2020 at 12:13 AM

Thank you poet for finding it and giving a fave.. Have a great day..

January 10, 2020 at 10:56 AM

This is beautiful. I love this masterpiece. Happy new year friend. Keep the lines blessing.

January 10, 2020 at 11:32 AM

Thank you for your kind words Funom..

January 10, 2020 at 7:10 AM

Congrats on your HM!;)

January 10, 2020 at 8:30 AM

Thank you Brenda..

January 9, 2020 at 11:53 AM

So nice. I am charmed. Love

January 9, 2020 at 12:04 PM

Thank you..

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 3, 2020 at 2:56 PM

- A delightful write about mother and child, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

January 3, 2020 at 10:21 PM

Thank you Anne..

Mystic Rose Rose

January 2, 2020 at 6:29 AM

Your eyes are deep set and so is your heart, your poetry reflects your wisdom, no matter what your age. Love it.

January 2, 2020 at 6:44 AM

Thank you for your kind words.. They are an inspiration..

January 1, 2020 at 1:49 PM

Aw, so adorable! :) gw

January 1, 2020 at 9:16 PM

Thank you..

Mahtab Bangalee

January 1, 2020 at 4:18 AM

child is the miracle for mother!

January 1, 2020 at 4:45 AM

Yeah.. Child is a miracle.. So the mother.. Thank you for your kind comment..

January 1, 2020 at 3:21 AM

Thanks for sharing this... worthy write that exemplifies your contest. God bless you.

January 1, 2020 at 3:24 AM

Thank you Beata..

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