Mother's Day

standing at your grave tear drops falling like the rain I'm missing you mom

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/29/2010 2:01:00 PM

Profound and touching..beautiful..Mother is Mother indeed..Charma

Justin Hensley

Date: 6/2/2009 2:43:00 PM

Very beautiful and sad indeed! We all get stronger from the things we indure in life! You my friend have gotten stronger over the times you have had great to see you express it in writting for us all to see the things you write! Great poem!

iolanda Scripca

Date: 5/25/2009 8:56:00 PM

I feel you sorrow Tyler. My Mother's Days are empty too but full of nice memories. Iolanda

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/24/2009 10:10:00 PM

Very sad, but beautifully said, Tyler. I miss mine too. Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/24/2009 10:10:00 PM

Profound and compelling. I've seen you and your work evolve in so many ways, I'm proud of you! This Senryu paints the picture that I saw with my own eyes...Raul