Bryn Strudwick Poet Haiku

Mother's Christmas

MOTHER’S CHRISTMAS

Christmas Day
Work away
Children play

Dad asleep
Not a peep
Lazy creep

Work complete
Have a treat
Sherry, sweet


20TH DECEMBER 2019

CHARLIEKU 3.3.3.CONTEST

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Sara Kendrick January 6, 2019 at 1:50 PM Congrats on your winning work. Sad to have to work on Christmas but some do in necessary occupations. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2019 at 11:46 PM - Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Bryn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina January 1, 2019 at 7:59 PM Awesome, Bryn. I love how you rhymed each stanza. I love the 2nd stanza it made me LOL Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Wish you a healthy and Happy New Year...Charlie Bryn Strudwick January 2, 2019 at 9:57 AM Thank you Charlie and a very prosperous and productive 2019 to you Bryn