Mothers Betrayal

as i look into my eyes 
i slip into a black abyss
all i know is we're apart 
so i just reminisce
I see your face in my mind 
when i shut my eyes
lay, wake, night after night
visions of you and i
she built a wall
but i stand tall
she never contemplated
that my love for you
my life, my world
could not be jaded
the time will come someday
and then you'll see the truth in me 
just me for me
how it was she
divided us
one by one
and made us three.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 24, 2010 at 11:17 AM
Interesting write that I see here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Welcome to soup. Sara
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January 23, 2010 at 11:31 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets ... continue to share your creative writings with us all.. this poem should be entered in the BETRAYAL CONTEST posted on your blue bar reading "contests" ... very appropriate to enter so check it out... thankxxx for sharing...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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January 23, 2010 at 7:20 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Michael. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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