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Mother said she drempt and saw into a gloomy depth where she glimpsed souls engulfed within the world's wounds. Mother said she saw where demons traipsed back and forth into the twelfth of hell, while anxious angels kept a watch amongst the dreaming adze* lest they awake the monster waiting in the nothing. * Adze: a vampiric being in Ewe folklore, told by the people of Togo and Ghana.

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Date: 9/12/2024 2:14:00 AM
Reads a bit like the current world Chetta..?? More to consider.??
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Chetta Achara
Date: 9/12/2024 5:25:00 PM
Indeed, the current world is on the edge and most of us don't even realize it.
Date: 8/27/2024 3:21:00 PM
Loved the atmosphere you created here! Enjoyable read!
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Date: 8/27/2024 3:37:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/27/2024 10:51:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative write. Mothers can be like an angel to us. Great Picture... "Good Luck" Have a great day............
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Date: 8/27/2024 3:37:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/26/2024 4:48:00 PM
Spooky!
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Date: 8/26/2024 4:51:00 PM
Yes.. Dreams can be spooky.
Date: 8/26/2024 4:42:00 PM
Thus story is fascinating. It reminds me of Lord of the Rings. Well penned.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 8/26/2024 4:45:00 PM
Thank you. Ah, Tolkien. I can only aspire!

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