Courtney Hubbert Poet Villanelle

Mother Nature's Muse

She moves whichever way wind is blowing      
Her body caught dancing in fire’s blue flames     
Like shadows in spaces never showing    

Fluent in language yet to be knowing  
Remembered only by the seasons claim     
She moves whichever way wind is blowing  

Eternal blaze in her body glowing    
She blushed on both sides that divide the same    
Like shadows in spaces never showing   

Mother Nature’s muse in essence growing    
Embraced in the light of dawn’s careful aim     
She moves whichever way wind is blowing    

Cloaked in power spoke about ongoing    
A lovely blame with insides of false shame        
Like shadows in spaces never showing   

Desire is the gift that she’s bestowing    
The demise of an ethereal dame     
She moves whichever way wind is blowing       
Like shadows in spaces never showing     


August 02, 2019
Villanelle

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Emile Pinet April 22, 2021 at 4:39 PM That is quite the improvement, it flows so much better my friend, Emile. Courtney Hubbert April 22, 2021 at 4:46 PM I really do appreciate your help. What would I do without you my friend. Thanks again.

Courtney Hubbert April 18, 2021 at 2:01 PM I welcome feedback. I'd love to hear from you. Drop me a comment...or two. Courtney Hubbert April 22, 2021 at 2:51 PM Okay Emile, I have edited the poem so that now each line has 10 syllables. I hope I did it right. I really did appreciate your help. It is always welcome.