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Mother Nature's Crowded House

Graceful flamingo flocks prance into spring, And trees budding green host hordes on a wing. In pine trees, squirrels scamper to sunshine, And dragonflies and blooms grace the tree line. Crickets chirp whole summer nighttimes away, Then vast herds of elk run all through midday. Butterfly bliss means pink mass migrations, While enthralling people teem proud nations. Through mountain meadow, vale, forest and sea, Spring's bursting all over, warm and carefree! Written on 3/21/2021 For: Rhyming Couplets Poetry Contest Sponsor: Janice Canerdy

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Date: 3/22/2021 1:16:00 PM
Evelyn, 'Mother Nature's Crowded House' I really like that. A great reminder in Spring's budding creation in finest Couplets. -Richard
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/22/2021 3:42:00 PM
Your enthusiastic response is so delighting, Richard. Thank you for your kind expression of appreciation. :)
Date: 3/22/2021 9:47:00 AM
superb poem with great alliteration. Great description.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/22/2021 9:56:00 AM
You have my deepest thanks. :D
Date: 3/22/2021 4:01:00 AM
Lovely sprinkling of Spring, alliteration and couplets!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/22/2021 9:45:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim. :D
Date: 3/21/2021 8:42:00 PM
Beautiful couplets with lovely pictures of blooms, animals, insects welcoming spring. Nice work, Evelyn. Good luck in the contest.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/21/2021 9:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, L Milton. Your words are pure delight. :D

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