Mother Nature

Some times she's in the clouds
Flowing cherry colored lines
Sending thunders eerie sound
That shutter the western skies

The stars are all around her
Blinking so very bright
The morning makes her wonder
Does Heaven has a night...

The sun has an early show
Silently staring around
Her misty wind blowing
Across the cold winters ground

Rainbow colors break from afar 
Only to race around the moon
Just like a shooting star
Stirring stardust clouds to bloom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Strand Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 1:04 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.Rgds Brian
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 11:13 PM
Mitch, Mother Nature is both miraculous and beautiful. This is a lovely tribute to her magnificence. Smiles, Dane Ann
Caliri Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 9:04 PM
Beautiful perfect rhythm, and cool touch of grace throughout. Simple and eternal...
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 5:33 PM
Soup mail in a moment, Mitch, regarding a question you posed to Bob Hinshaw.
Brown Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 5:21 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration Mitch. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 10:50 AM
Awesome perspective on nature, Mitch! Many great lines, especially enjoyed the last verse. I have an image of "stardust clouds" emerging from your shooting star. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
Bathsheba Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 5:19 AM
Excellent write Mitch - It has perfect flow - Thankyou for sharing such lovely language -:)
Kendrick Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 5:09 AM
Great write about Mother Nature..Does Heaven has a night...Very descriptive and expressive write..Has great rhythm and rhyme..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 4:42 AM
pretty and nicely penned this day!! enjoyed!!
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