Mother May I Haiku

Mother may I go
Mother may I sleep at night
Mother may I lay
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December 19, 2012 at 11:02 AM
A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Anna. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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December 19, 2012 at 10:06 AM
What is this really about? I love the title but I don't get your haiku poem. I gotta be honest!
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December 18, 2012 at 8:17 PM
A lovely and sweet haiku... Hope mother agrees... :-)...Linda
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