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Mother Heaven

Mother heaven , earth
Men cut off the navel-string
heaven soared up high


(Inspired by ancient Indian Legends and folktales)

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Dorian Petersen Potter

January 31, 2015 at 12:36 PM

Hello Rajat! Excellent pen! I truly enjoyed this very clever haiku, my dearest friend Rajat. A 7 from me! Have a wonderful weekend! God bless you! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^

Poet Destroyer A

January 31, 2015 at 4:00 AM

Rajat, amazing haiku...PD

David Meade

January 30, 2015 at 4:08 PM

reminds me of crucifixion . . . well done dearly lovely friend. 8

Sara Kendrick

January 30, 2015 at 1:38 PM

Interesting work. There are some very good ancient stories or myths told which give poets good material to write a good work. Thanks for the visit. Sara