Mother Heaven

Mother heaven , earth Men cut off the navel-string heaven soared up high (Inspired by ancient Indian Legends and folktales)

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/31/2015 12:36:00 PM

Hello Rajat! Excellent pen! I truly enjoyed this very clever haiku, my dearest friend Rajat. A 7 from me! Have a wonderful weekend! God bless you! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2015 4:00:00 AM

Rajat, amazing haiku...PD

David Meade

Date: 1/30/2015 4:08:00 PM

reminds me of crucifixion . . . well done dearly lovely friend. 8

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2015 1:38:00 PM

Interesting work. There are some very good ancient stories or myths told which give poets good material to write a good work. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/30/2015 12:10:00 PM

- Well said, Rajat !!!! - Words that I also use "cut off the navel-string" ,: (be adult / behave yourself) - // Anne-Lise :)