Mother Goose and Father Time

Mother Goose and Father Time
All together had children nine.
Love ruled hers,
His were let free.
All wound up productive, happy and fine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kiser Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Are you sure there were only nine?
Krutsinger Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 11:30 AM
I had to be as I was needing a rhyme.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 4:29 PM
A healing poem! Nice!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 10:06 PM
Thank you Kim. I always say there are hundreds of ways to parent, and thousands of religions, and perspectives, and every mother knows the best way.
Bangalee Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 4:53 AM
nice children ! heavy productivity! /// nice humorous
Krutsinger Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 6:37 AM
Thank you. I was trying to make light of the fact that we all think our parenting style is the best, but many styles and ways sometimes work well in the end.
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 1:32 AM
oh this is so charming and adorable!!! Thanks what you said on my If poem. But I really have so far to go to measure up to some of the compassionate souls I know.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 6:37 AM
I had a blast with this one as the first line came out of my mind and laughed and we were off!
Theraven Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 1:12 AM
You are so specially blessed. Such a gift you have. -Richard
Krutsinger Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 6:39 AM
Thank you so much, Richard. I was a writer, and then I was not, and now I am again, and I am sort of trying to make up for the many many years I did not remember that I was. (Many many many many many years - probably over 35).
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