Mother

When the rose bud died you came out
More beautiful than where you originate
Your golden heart loves with no doubt
And your untainted mind doesn't complicate.

Your nature steers my imprudent course
While intoxicated I sit beside your grace
Looking at your buoyancy with no remorse
That I am not as clean as your bare face.

In my blood runs brands of liquors
Morning after morning I take a sip
Until I am consumed like an inebriate critter
Hanging in the verge of sanity's tip.

And when evening comes I sleep not
I wait for the dawn to introduce the Sun
To see you waiting at 6am on the dot
For me to come home after some fun.

Now I stare at an empty bottle of gin
Where the remnants of my childhood lies
Once again, I'm haunted by the ghosts within
They carry the pain that never dies.

The memories of how I took you for granted
Gives me enough chills to keep me sober
I wish I could turn the hands of time if I wanted
For a wonderful person I call my mother.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barden Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 3:15 AM
Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, PJ - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-)
Gongora Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 6:34 PM
Hi Greg, thank you. =)
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March 14, 2018 at 9:13 AM
My favourite stanza "Now I stare at an empty bottle of gin Where the remnants of my childhood lies Once again, I'm haunted by the ghosts within They carry the pain that never dies." Love your poem, PJ. Congrats on your win.
Gongora Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 11:34 AM
Thank You Line :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 7:01 AM
That last verse! Congrats, PJ!
Gongora Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 7:15 AM
Thank you Kim :)
Ward Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 2:45 AM
Well done for your poem making fourth in my short winners' list, PJ.
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March 14, 2018 at 7:15 AM
Thank You Julia :)
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