Mother

Just an acknowledgment 
of what you meant to me.
  When no one else was there, 
you believed in me.

When others around deceived,
 you wiped my tears,
You, weeped with me.

When life was hard, you showed me. 
 The wisdom you
Knew to mold me.

  When heartache had bestowed me, 
you held out your
   Hands to hold me.

When the load was to heavy to bare,  
you helped me.
   Face my worst fears.

Your presence is still felt, in many ways. 
 Your granddaughters reflection
Keeps my spirit & faith..

Now being a mother, I truly understand. 
 The sacrifices, you.made, commited to
Support, guidance & love at hand.

The greatest love, I've ever received,
 my departed mother
   Whom I still grieve.

  Although the years have swiftly passed, 
the memory of your
Love will never surpass. 

 Etched inside is my sincere love &.thanks
   To be blessed, with a mother, 
gone, to fast.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kilmer Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 2:14 AM
Beautifully written. I am so happy that you had such a close relationship with our mother. It's rare sometimes to see that between daughter and mother. You are blessed to have such a relationship. I wish you all the best. Kilmer
Thomas Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 7:18 PM
Hi kilmer I lost my mom in my mid 20s I think it takes, time to build that loving relationship. Gone so soon, its been a big void in my life that cant be filled...thankyou so much for your lovely comment appreciate it very muchxx hugz...cherie
Thomas Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 7:06 PM
Thanks so much for your kind comment anne....ty:)
Andresen Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 3:52 PM
- Lovely tribute to your mother, Cherie ! - Hide the memories in your heart forever. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 5:45 PM
So sorry for your loss. I hope when she was alive that she got to see your poetry and appreciate it.
Thomas Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 9:04 PM
Thanks andrea, yes she did a little bit...appreciate your kind encouraging words, Thankyou for commenting always,,, cherie...
Kendrick Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 4:35 PM
Great work honoring your mother..Mothers and fathers are so important in our lives..It is sad that today people have children but are not ready to take on the responsibility..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..
Thomas Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 9:00 PM
Thankyou sara, yes we definitely have to honour our parents, yes it is a major responsibility that takes maturity & nurturing...love your comment Thankyou:0)
Bono Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 10:56 AM
Very nice tribute to MOMS.My birth mom died when I was 7,my aunt MOM died in 2002,It is very hard to lose your parents at any age.Thank you for your visit.Love Colleen
Thomas Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 8:49 PM
Hi colleen, thankyou!!! its so true, sorry for your loss, any age is a heartfelt loss but thank god we have, people that step in as a mother like figure weather biological, or not....thanks so much for your comment blessings always......Cheriex
Mohammed Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 7:46 PM
Impressive and touching my friend.Awesome!
Thomas Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 10:00 AM
Thanks so much m....your lovely appreciate your kindness......<3 cherie
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 5:00 PM
Cherie it sounds like your mom was a very special lady and loved you very much. This is a wonderful dedication. Your memories of her will always live in your heart. Hugs, Connie
Thomas Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 9:59 AM
Thanks so much Connie, for your warm thoughtful comment appreciate your kindness.....cheriex
Tacito Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 10:56 AM
A very, very touching dedication. Keep her close in heart. Respect for this piece.
Thomas Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 3:43 PM
Hello drake,,,, thanks so much really appreciate your kindness!!! I will:) thanks, your comment means alot.
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