Mother

Every heartbeat is bestowed upon, Compassion embraces a child eternally That uplifts a child’s soul in isolation in every way.

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Date: 12/3/2014 12:47:00 PM

Great haiku Bhavna. Try traditional 5-7-5 you will feel better write better...my personal experience. Love. Hugs! Rajat

Date: 7/6/2013 10:33:00 PM

:-) enjoying your Featured Poem of the week. take care and have yourself a great coming week. xox~ LINDA"

Date: 7/4/2013 10:24:00 AM

BHAVNA, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. have a nice 4th of July. *SKAT

Date: 7/2/2013 9:32:00 AM

This was heartwarming and full of truth. Very, very beautiful.

Date: 1/6/2013 10:51:00 AM

a good haiku~ LUV~ SKAT

Bhavna Khemlani
Date: 1/8/2013 9:01:00 PM

Thanks :)

Date: 1/5/2013 5:37:00 PM

An isolated child has much need of his mother's compassion. it would be a perfect world if all children had this kind of mother!

Bhavna Khemlani
Date: 1/8/2013 9:00:00 PM

So true! I would wish the same.