Mother

You raised me so nice I can't repay your service Never ending love One day I hope that I can reward you my mom With what you deserve Love, happiness, peace That is what I will strive for In all of your days

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2011 11:46:00 PM

I agree with Cory. VEry nicely done.

Cory Long

Date: 5/3/2011 2:58:00 PM

this was beautiful and nicely done. The flow was perfect. cory

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/2/2011 2:28:00 PM

Lovely, sentimental and emoional expressions on mother, R.M.

James Foulk

Date: 4/29/2011 5:52:00 PM

a touching piece and so warm and tender that shows your love for your mother. thank for your comments on My Journey Home and for your support of my poetry.

Anthony Nutter

Date: 4/27/2011 2:55:00 AM

Cherish them while you still have them, her day is rapidly approaching to be remembered and honored as this poem does.