Matt Hunt Poet Senryu

Mother

You raised me so nice
I can't repay your service
Never ending love

One day I hope that
I can reward you my mom
With what you deserve

Love, happiness, peace
That is what I will strive for
In all of your days

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Andrea Dietrich May 13, 2011 at 11:46 PM I agree with Cory. VEry nicely done.

Cory Long May 3, 2011 at 2:58 PM this was beautiful and nicely done. The flow was perfect. cory

Dr.Ram Mehta May 2, 2011 at 2:28 PM Lovely, sentimental and emoional expressions on mother, R.M.

James Foulk April 29, 2011 at 5:52 PM a touching piece and so warm and tender that shows your love for your mother. thank for your comments on My Journey Home and for your support of my poetry.

Anthony Nutter April 27, 2011 at 2:55 AM Cherish them while you still have them, her day is rapidly approaching to be remembered and honored as this poem does.