Mother

A schoolroom of my childhood my mother's heart My shy adolescence her tender warmth purified My present success her new pride glorified For Francine’s, ‘Senryu for mom’ contest

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Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 5/9/2011 1:22:00 AM

Many congrats Tahera for coveted big win in Francine's contest with imagination at its best in this one. Was away hence bit late in wishing/responding. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2011 1:13:00 PM

Creative win...Congrats..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/4/2011 1:52:00 PM

Lovey and sweet write !!!! great to be in the same list as you!!!

Jack Horne

Date: 5/4/2011 1:35:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win, Tahera : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2011 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations Tahera on your win in Francine's contest "Senryu For Mother". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 5/4/2011 11:58:00 AM

Tahera, Great to see you in the top five. Congratulations on your succes with this honored presentation. Agape, Moses

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/4/2011 11:42:00 AM

Hey there Tahera, congratulations on your win in Francine's contest ;-)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2011 10:28:00 AM

Cogratulations on the fifth place win in the contest, Tahera

Kash Poet

Date: 5/4/2011 2:47:00 AM

Many Congrats Tahera on your win-kash

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2011 11:31:00 PM

Wonderful poems and win, Tahera. Congratulations.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/3/2011 10:53:00 PM

soo moving, tahera... congrats on the big win! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/3/2011 9:08:00 PM

Congrats Tahera on your big win in Francine's contest with this wonderful entry on Mom.. tender and touching qualities luv..enjoy..

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/3/2011 5:38:00 PM

beautiful senryus Tahera, congrats on your fifth place win in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2011 3:28:00 PM

So sweet, Tahera. this is the first I came across this particular contest. I am so out of it these days!! I better get on the ball. WEll, I think you did an amazing job for the contest. LUv, andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/25/2011 2:51:00 PM

It's so nice you were able to make her proud, Tahera. A heart-warming entry for Francine's contest. Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2011 2:33:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..I know that your mother will appreciate the honor and praise that you give her...Thanks for stopping by and the kind review of my work...Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/25/2011 12:51:00 PM

absolutely engaging, tahera... winning wishes to you! likey, likey this! :) huggs, nette

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/25/2011 9:01:00 AM

thank you for entering my contest Tahera

Kash Poet

Date: 4/25/2011 8:15:00 AM

EXcellent write on your mother Tahera.Enjoyed---kash

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/25/2011 6:27:00 AM

Sensitive tribute to your Mother Tahera dear friend.. lovely words of your precious appreciation for her presence in your life.. missing my own Mother so very much.. good luck in the contest luv..