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Mother

Wound up tight like a bobbin ready to spin into action Sewing lines for those to walk in the footsteps of her and hers Taking charge to ensure we have everything its second nature and is her reason to breathe Nurture and protect the kin of own skin her resilience, inspires and motivates The long term gains Will run through veins of Mothers bairns and theirs and theirs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/29/2018 11:21:00 AM
Laura, this not only a wonderful dedication to your mother. But classic poetry..
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Laura Hay
Date: 4/30/2018 7:26:00 AM
Your kind words are much appreicated aswell as motivation to continue writing Harry. Warm regards, Laura.
Date: 4/27/2018 1:24:00 AM
Simply wonderful writing!!
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Laura Hay
Date: 4/30/2018 7:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea!! :) , warm regards, Laura.
Date: 4/25/2018 1:15:00 PM
It is a fortune to have a mother who is not only a fount of inspiration, but also a loyal supporter, Laura! A lovely poem, especially the end stanza. ~ Warm regards to mother & daughter:) // paul
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Laura Hay
Date: 4/26/2018 7:46:00 AM
It is indeed Paul, and thanks again for your positive feedback!!Warm regards, Laura.
Date: 4/19/2018 11:45:00 PM
Love this Laura ????
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Laura Hay
Date: 4/20/2018 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Mum xx

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