moth in the heart

as earth revolves around sun
my heart revolves around you
coloring my life

Third Place Winner: Constance La France-Write Three Beautiful Lines-3/7/25
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Delaney Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 2:14 AM
Lovely words. Congratulations on your top placement.
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 1:31 PM
Ahhh!!! I hope that the heat and color continue for a lifetime. Sara K
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