Moth

"Moth" The night shivers out Hymns upon lonely gray wings They drift like a sigh

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Heather Ober

Date: 2/26/2013 8:03:00 AM

Wow, adding this one to my faves. The imagery is stunning!

Skat A

Date: 2/25/2013 7:26:00 PM

Jeremy, ooo!!! I'm not much of a moth person. However the imagery is something I see here every now and then. Makes me wonder why so frail. PS. I read and enjoyed the poem you posted named "EMILY." have a sweet one~SKAT

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/22/2013 9:42:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jeremy! Love, Kim

Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/25/2013 8:39:00 PM

Thank ye kim!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2013 6:31:00 PM

wow, yours is amazing, Jeremy. what happened to you? i don't think I saw you lately. Congrats in this contest.

Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/22/2013 7:06:00 PM

I've been around, here and there ;) I always appreciate your comments and visits Andrea

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/22/2013 1:32:00 AM

Hi congratulations, great haiku, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/22/2013 7:06:00 PM

Hey Mandy, thanks for your lovely attention

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2013 6:11:00 PM

Jeremy ,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/22/2013 7:07:00 PM

Linda, thank you!!! I love writing haiku, my second favorite form of all time

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/19/2013 3:21:00 PM

so tender and lovely!

Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/22/2013 7:05:00 PM

Ilene, thank you.

Michael Dom

Date: 2/18/2013 11:36:00 PM

Hey Jeremy, I'm liking this one very. Check out 'my favourite haiku', I think we may have a theme going here. maybe even haikai no renga?