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My sister Pat says my words are too big, that I lose my audience due to this. By far, most people just don’t give a fig; Anything over one’s head’s just a miss. My vocabulary’s filled With nonsense, And no one bothers to find the meaning. No one wants their reading to be so dense What I think’s clever is just demeaning. Why can’t I just write simple stuff About flowers and family and life? Why isn’t that enough without dredging up the dark, unhappy strife? While I swim through depressing depths, most people splash and play in shallows. They laugh out loud, don’t hold their breath. Real humor doesn’t come from gallows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/7/2012 9:59:00 AM
it hurts but they'll always be critics, this I know well. "you'll never make anything out of that writing, but if I succeed by impacting 1 person, I am a successful writer. My reason for writing. Your poem , or shall I say verse is very well expressed, thank you for allowing us to read this. Take good care & God Bless PS can't please everyone....
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