Most Important Thought

Strip away the day,
Your title and all your ways,
Take away your clothes,
Look into the mirror and watch truth be exposed,
For a man with all his plans,
And a woman with all her thoughts,
Cannot lead one into the Kings courts.
A smile fades with circumstances,
Life may serve you avalanches,
Dreams may vanish like mist above a lake,
What’s most important is when you die where you will awake.


BY: Sabina Nicole
Written: 1-1-12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 27, 2012 at 11:36 AM
Congrats on your win Sabina.Beautiful poem.
Nicole Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:53 PM
:)
Prabhu Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 8:15 AM
gr8 write.... ~sashi
Nicole Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:54 PM
thank you
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 9:37 PM
Congrats on your win this amazing write! Blessings, Rhonda
Nicole Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:54 PM
thank you
Brown Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 5:39 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Sabina. Love, Carol
Nicole Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:55 PM
:)
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February 26, 2012 at 11:14 AM
congrats Sabina on winniing an HM for these lovely words luv..
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November 26, 2011 at 3:32 PM
* "Absolutely True & Completely Beautiful * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Nicole * I Do Hold A Very Deep Love * I Wish To Spend All of Eternity With * Owww, Let It Be So & Let Myself Awaken Within Their Arms * My Luv, Always & Forever * Sarah." *
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November 26, 2011 at 3:04 PM
Nice write that def makes me feel the words and thoughts. Well written piece my poet friend. Michael
Nicole Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:55 PM
thank you!!!
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