Most Beautiful Birthday-Qd

Your birth was a most beautiful day
Chosen to arrive at winters end
Burst upon my world without delay
This love of mine a gift you can spend

A beauteous day each year I say
To emblazon joy I comprehend
Help you bloom into a fine bouquet
Upon my heart your life does transcend

Your stars entwined with my jubilance



written:  9-28-2019
Queen Of Day 9 x 9 Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Allison Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 6:03 PM
I can relate so much with the birth of my son Jeanne!:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 4:24 PM
Beautiful verse, Jeanne, congratulations on your win. Hugs dear friend
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October 19, 2019 at 9:11 AM
Congrats, Jeanne. Well penned.
Messina Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 7:56 AM
This is such a beautiful poem Jeanne. Love this my dear friend. Congratulations on your placement in my contest...hugs Charlie
Mcgee Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 8:29 AM
Thanks so much Charlie...I loved getting to write of someone that means so much to me!
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 2:47 PM
It's so cool to see what means beautiful for different people. I see yours involves someone special!! VEry nice.
Mcgee Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 8:31 AM
Yes, as does your. Dancing forever in our arms.
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September 29, 2019 at 12:07 AM
Beautiful, Jeanne... I wish you the best in the contest. God bless you
Laurie Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 11:28 PM
Hello Jeanne … a day you just cannot forget and each year the beauty of it returns to give you that warm feeling - thanks Jeanne - Lindsay
Mcgee Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 8:31 AM
I'm so glad we get to celebrate each year the birth of our special people.
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 12:35 PM
- A truly beautiful day ... best wishes in the contest, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 28, 2019 at 11:57 AM
I can visually see the stars entwined with your jubilance on such a day. New life … new love.. A day to rejoice. Enjoyed reading your poem.
Mcgee Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Thank you Debra...and thanks for stopping by for a read.
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