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Mosquito Men

Cheap bullet holes Through cheap souls Make rich ones! Aimed at them with no college, no future...no funds Have fun with guns?! And be all you can be?! And so, we shall see... But bloodied clouds will garner When all is dead and calmer Bloodied history shall not be missed But feeble, blood lust men will clench a fist The invalueable commodities sigh All lost...at cost from those up high The mosquito men who fly by For young to fight and die Mosquito men sucking dry With leanest, redest eye To meet the keenest, deadest guy

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Date: 6/6/2011 7:49:00 AM
Great title to address this topic, James! A wonderfully composed tale unfolds within this verse. Don't like mosquitoes...teeny tiny; make the loudest sound and has the meanest bite!:( Makes me feel itchy. Outstandin metaphors and imagery happening here! Best wishes...Mikki
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