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Mosquito Men

Cheap bullet holes
Through cheap souls
Make rich ones!
Aimed at them with no college, no future...no funds

Have fun with guns?!
And be all you can be?!
And so, we shall see...

But bloodied clouds will garner
When all is dead and calmer
Bloodied history shall not be missed
But feeble, blood lust men will clench a fist

The invalueable commodities sigh
All lost...at cost from those up high
The mosquito men who fly by
For young to fight and die
Mosquito men sucking dry
With leanest, redest eye
To meet the keenest, deadest guy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/6/2011 7:49:00 AM
Great title to address this topic, James! A wonderfully composed tale unfolds within this verse. Don't like mosquitoes...teeny tiny; make the loudest sound and has the meanest bite!:( Makes me feel itchy. Outstandin metaphors and imagery happening here! Best wishes...Mikki
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