Mosaic: On Missing the Morning

She described the morning as 
misty,
          dewy,
                    and delighted in its freshness. 
Drowsy
         from 
                  dreams

her waking filled with,
pastel clouds,
                       bright flowers,
                                               breeze-filled trees,
and joyous birdsong. 

She saw, felt,
                     heard 
                             and smelt
                                             the wondrous day.
2.
He described the morning as,
too
      early -- don’t rouse him.

Keep  the 
                curtains drawn
                                    and 
                                         leave him slumber.

Not for him the
                    morning freshness,
                                              morning beauty
                                                                or another dancing day.  
 Tell the twittering
birds to stop the noise --  just go away.

He 
     prefers
                 descent 
                             into the sard of sleep to
                                                                  dream 
                                                                            and dream again,

the dreams of only sleep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Michaels Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 4:21 AM
Lovely descriptions and a great contrast of perspectives of the same "moment". The rich potential of the day, against the humdrum banality of everyday existance. Nice write!
Sirak Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 7:59 AM
Love it. The contrast of life viewed through a poet's dreamy eyes, and the eyes of a practical realist. I will take the dreamy vision.
Andresen Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 4:35 AM
- A beautiful poem, SuZ ! - I wish you and your family a peaceful and happy Christmas ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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