Mortician
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The lighting, it was over-bright
She seemed to merely be at rest
I'd made her up just right despite
the lighting (it was over-bright!)
When caught in a carress, one might
need not confess but ought suggest
the lighting. It was over-bright
...She seemed to merely be at rest
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