Mortality

the ocean existed before me the waves do not cease in my wake

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Date: 5/18/2012 9:24:00 PM

Brilliant Haiku Robin!! I love its depth and introspection!! Well Done my friend! big hugs, love ya deb

Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/19/2012 3:05:00 PM

Thank you very much, Deb, for the very nice compliments...love ya back! robinwrennfiore

Date: 5/14/2012 7:30:00 PM

What a marvelous HAIKU! It really puts things in perspective, Robin. BRAVO!! Best wishes, Keith

Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/15/2012 4:43:00 PM

Keith, you are too kind. thank you, sincerely. robinwrennfiore

Date: 5/12/2012 1:51:00 PM

You weren't pondered, you were drank in with this poem.

Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/12/2012 4:48:00 PM

Wow. How incredibly gracious of you. Your comment was fabulous. Your talent shows.

Date: 5/12/2012 5:57:00 AM

nicely done Robin..

Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/12/2012 6:33:00 AM

thank you very much, Joseph.

Date: 5/11/2012 5:38:00 PM

Nice imagery. Flows well

Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/11/2012 6:03:00 PM

thank you, I'm happy to have been pondered.