Mortality

the ocean existed before me

the waves do not cease

in my wake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Burch Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 9:24 PM
Brilliant Haiku Robin!! I love its depth and introspection!! Well Done my friend! big hugs, love ya deb
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May 19, 2012 at 3:05 PM
Thank you very much, Deb, for the very nice compliments...love ya back! robinwrennfiore
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May 14, 2012 at 7:30 PM
What a marvelous HAIKU! It really puts things in perspective, Robin. BRAVO!! Best wishes, Keith
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May 15, 2012 at 4:43 PM
Keith, you are too kind. thank you, sincerely. robinwrennfiore
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May 12, 2012 at 1:51 PM
You weren't pondered, you were drank in with this poem.
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May 12, 2012 at 4:48 PM
Wow. How incredibly gracious of you. Your comment was fabulous. Your talent shows.
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May 12, 2012 at 5:57 AM
nicely done Robin..
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May 12, 2012 at 6:33 AM
thank you very much, Joseph.
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May 11, 2012 at 5:38 PM
Nice imagery. Flows well
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May 11, 2012 at 6:03 PM
thank you, I'm happy to have been pondered.
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